A Careless Act
25 April, 2003
Author: Leah06
I can't belive you did that
You were a great friend to me
If I did it to you
What kind of friend would I be?
What you did was hurtful
Can't you see me crying
You may not even realize
Our friendship is quickly dieing.
What you did wasen't cool
In fact it really hurt
You think you are my friend
But friends don't treat each other like dirt.
If you were in my position
You would be crying too
But wait I forgot
I woulden't do that to you.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| barb (66.46.241.192) -- Monday, April 28 2003, 10:43 pm leah I like this kind of writing it shows your disappointment,your pain and hurt your anger loved it you got out what you wanted to express.Very good |
| Seizure (68.155.205.74) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 03:43 am I thought you said I probably wouldn't like your new works. I thought both were really well written. |
| Brenda Michelle (209.178.146.179) -- Thursday, May 1 2003, 04:05 am i really like this poem! friends really shouldnt treat friends like that! it is just wrong! but still great poem! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, May 2 2003, 03:25 am Yea it hurt like hell but it just goes to show ya the "friends" you make in high school arent really your friends and youll never talk to them again after highschool most likly anyways. Thanks for the comments! |
| mario (66.81.73.46) -- Sunday, June 1 2003, 12:05 am it really really sucks tp be betrayed... i sometimes feel like that way too...(like a third person making you or your friend to choose to be their friend or your friend/the other person's friend) |
| Melissa (12.247.179.14) -- Sunday, June 1 2003, 04:33 am I LIKE THAT POEM A WHOLE LOT. iT ReMiNdS Me Of mY fRiEnD DoInG iT tO mE!ThAt PoEm ExPrEsSeS AlOt!ReAdInG tHiS pOeM mAdE Me ReALIzE sO mAnY tHiNgS.daMn iT sUcKs tO Be bEtyRaYeD! |
| Leah06 (172.17.25.26) -- Tuesday, June 10 2003, 03:49 pm Thanks to both of you. WIth out comments i wouldent submitt my poems anymore and you both are helping me stay. Thanks a lot! |
| Left Behind (64.12.116.141) -- Thursday, April 8 2004, 01:37 am This poem sounds as if you are telling me about my two sisters greed. Thanks |
| Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Wednesday, May 19 2004, 10:33 pm Yourwlecome, i hope you liked the poem too... |
| DJ HILL (67.49.210.173) -- Thursday, January 20 2005, 09:50 pm GRATE POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FRIENDS R VERY FEW AND FAR IN BETWEEN!!!!!!!!!! |
| Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Tuesday, February 1 2005, 08:15 am Yes i agree. And thanks for reading my poem. i hope you continue to read... |
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