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More Than A Friend
30 March, 2003
Author: Leah06

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I know
She hurt you
I can't
Mend your pain
I listen
To everything, even what you don't say
I am
Just a friend to you
You are
More then that to me
I share
My thoughts and feelings with you
I can't
Change who I am
You don't know
The flowers were from me
I want
To be your girl.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Martin Vann (65.56.170.98) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 04:12 pm

What a Lucky, guy, he sounds perfect except for one thing...,

Leah06;

Whoever he is, he is one lucky guy, he sounds like he would be perfect except for his eyes. He should get them checked by a Seeing Heart Doctor, I fear, he must be going blind, not to see you!

Very Good!
MartinV
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 03:26 am

You serioulsy are my favorate commenter

Martin- you are the best commenting person who has commented on my stuff so far. wether its good or bad you always make me a better poet. Thanks soo much! I don't think anyone can see me, i must be invinsable. (not shure if i spelled that right)
Brenda Juarez (209.178.185.82) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 05:35 am

Martin is right

he should go get checked up on. you are a very sincere, you would be a great girlfriend. I really hope you find someone who will treat you with respect, every girl deserves a chance with a great guy!!!
keep up the great writting, you are doing very well.
Brenda Michelle (209.178.185.82) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 05:35 am

Martin is right

he should go get checked up on. you are a very sincere, you would be a great girlfriend. I really hope you find someone who will treat you with respect, every girl deserves a chance with a great guy!!!
keep up the great writting, you are doing very well.
Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 12:54 am

Umm Are you 2 the same person?

Thanks for the comments. I am glad you appritiate my writing!
 
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