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People's Feelings
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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When writing something be kind.
Say things that people don't mind.

What you think is cute and harmless.
May hurt and make them feel worthless.

What you think is good,
May put somebody in a bad mood.

It hurt that what I thought was special.
Was taken the wrong way.

Be careful what you write.
Others might not take it right.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Wednesday, February 26 2003, 11:36 pm


I suppose we all think differently Barb. However, perhaps this person was being a bit over-sensitive! Don't upset yourself, you meant well not harm.
Martin Vann (65.57.61.136) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 05:24 pm

Words, some or soft & smooth, others, salt soaked, razor blades.

Barbara;

You nailed me good! with this honest view. I always want to be sincere and honest when I speak/write with words. However, sometimes, they are the devil's tools.

This is a good time for me to apoligize to anyone who ever thought that my words were rude or crule.

Thanks Barbara, I feel a lot better, thanks to You!

MartinV
barb (216.129.37.250) -- Saturday, March 1 2003, 11:00 pm

I'm glad you liked it

martin v you are welcome. Thanks
anonymous (67.25.224.5) -- Wednesday, May 14 2003, 06:47 am

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i love your poems its so true i wish more people where like that but there is not very meany people thaat realy care
amanda (80.47.207.15) -- Monday, August 30 2004, 09:30 am

your so right

all of what you say iz so true and i know exsactly where your coming from cus im exsactly the same when im in a bad mood nobody can say antthing right i just snap there heads off so all my family and friends have learnt that when im in a mood they just have to ignore me cus i get over it quicker and that way noby has to join me when in a mood
 
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