Love Online
24 March, 2003
Author: Leah06
I love the way i can see us together
Walking hand in hand
On the shores of a beach
Barefoot in the sand.
Laughing together
Racing time
Huging under the stars
Your check against mine.
The way you listen
To everything I say
The way that you love me
In every single way.
The way that I can trust you
In everything you do
Because I know
I love you too.
I think about us
Even when I sleep
Everything you say
Is a memorie to keep.
But when the day is closing
And it is time to say goodnight
We know that it is over
Time has won this fight.
So when we lean together
For a goodnight kiss
This is my slice of heaven
That I am shure not to miss.
I purse my lips together
Gently close my eyes
I touch
But somthing else in surprise.
A cold,flat,glassy surface
Of my computer screen
And now I realize
I am but a lonley teen.
You were just another teen
That I met online
Just another fantasie
Anotherimage of mine.
I know you are out there somewhere
Dreaming of me too
But finding your computer screen
Like I have done with you.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| bill (152.163.188.197) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 10:22 pm your poems are amazing . the way u put words togetter is remarkable. i love u leah |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.38) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 10:35 pm Aw! |
| Martin Vann (67.30.64.192) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 12:32 am Leah, From the very first words I read, I began to step upon the stairs, one step, leading me to the next, so naturally. Felt the words and walked the walk. Clever, just clever and cute, yet, sensual, I have to say bye, turning off my computer screen, see you tomorrow? MartinV |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 01:10 am Well this has all become a shock to me. I was verry scared no one would like my poems. Thank you for your comments. |
| Martin Vann (67.30.64.192) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 01:36 am Continue to write like this and we will read and we will reply. MartinV Use honest words, and you will have nothing to fear! |
| Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Wednesday, March 26 2003, 01:30 pm I thought you should submit your work here. I enjoyed it as well. Good writing. |
| Sasha (64.12.96.78) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 01:26 am that was a very very very cute poem leah ;) |
| Crazy 1 (24.72.92.94) -- Sunday, March 30 2003, 10:22 pm I liked your poem it was funny when you were describing the kiss than all of a sudden the cold computer screen kicked in but no cute poem! keep writing! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Tuesday, April 1 2003, 04:12 am Well, i am glad somone likes my poems. Somtimes i just want to stop writing in fear of somone not liking it or judjing me because of it. Thank you so much for the comments! They are much appritiated! |
| MetaFlare777 (4.61.195.232, 1) -- Wednesday, April 2 2003, 08:58 am Eh, great! With each "comment" I produce, I deepen and focus the anger of your cult followers upon myself. But, to give myself a moment of respite, I shall appease your faithful peers by giving you, what's that good thing called again? Oh yes, a compliment. I have to say, your not bad at this stuff. Besides the fact that I find poems amazingly boring overall, your poems have truly sprouted within me a will and longing to actually post something on this web-site. Wait a second! What am I saying!?!?!?! |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 04:22 am Well Metta, i have achived your aproval! It takes alot to hurt my feelings so please comment all you like. Please post your own, i am a big fan of poetry! |
| Dark Wolf (65.19.212.33) -- Thursday, December 23 2004, 07:26 am this is way cool it all fits togeather |
| Leah06 (67.169.135.192) -- Tuesday, January 4 2005, 01:50 am thank you |
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