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29 May, 2003
Author: Lil Lulu

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her boyfriend dumped her yesterday
her parents only care about her brother not her
she feels like no one loves her
she feels like no one cares
she thinks if she kills her self no one will notice
she thinks if she kills her self no one will care
so frist she grabed the knife and ran up stairs.
she ran past the whole family wit it wavin in the air.
but no one seemed to care.
she she ran to her room and locked the door.
she out wit one slice on the right
then a second on the left
then another on the right
and yet another on the left
she kept slicing till her hand became numb and the knife dropped
she watches as her blood flows out of her arms onto the carpet
she begins to cry
"what am i doin?"
"do i wanna die like this?"
"was it all in my head?"
"am i havin a nightmare?"
"when will i wake up?"
the she fell to the floor from all the pain she began to feel
this cant be a dream because it wouldn't hurt likd this
"oh my goodness what have i done,
i dont want to die"she screams
as she slowly slips away

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Comments on this poem/writing:

bench (192.168.0.35) -- Thursday, July 10 2003, 05:44 am

tragic!

I can feel the pain!
alisa (216.39.201.191) -- Friday, November 21 2003, 03:54 am

WOW

im speechless...
Angel in Tears (81.157.221.169) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 03:33 pm

Bravo!

You have really captured the esence of the feelings!Love it!
Darkness (168.221.27.195) -- Monday, February 14 2005, 07:23 pm

Wow!!!!!

great
 
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