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Forest
4 March, 2004
Author: LinzAy

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she's lost in a forest covered with snow
She's lost in a place where nobody goes

She cannot escape, she cannot break free
she cups her face in her hands and collapses to her knees

Her world is spinning, she feels a drunken fool
Staring at her reflection so soft in a mirrored pool

Confusion is taking over, she doesnt know what to do
Run to nowhere or stay in love with you

She's lost in her heart and doesnt know if she should let you in
She's kept it free from pain so far, why should she now let pain have a chance to begin?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.208.166) -- Tuesday, March 16 2004, 07:09 pm

Suspensful!

"Forest" coming to a theater near you...........In all seriousness, LinzAy, I thought that was absolutely marvellous. (the poem)
LinzAy (65.33.111.167) -- Wednesday, March 17 2004, 10:23 am

Meridian

Honestly, i think this is the weirdest comment i've ever recieved!

Glad ya liked! :D
everett (209.240.207.249) -- Saturday, March 20 2004, 07:55 am

confusion

confusion..isnt it a pain in the ...well you know what! but really...very awesome poem linz...another great one
LinzAy (205.188.116.80) -- Friday, March 26 2004, 09:03 am

EV!!! :D

Yes yes it is a pain in the....cough cough...um...what was i saying? oh yea...thanks for the comment! lol
 
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