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i Love You
31 October, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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You wrote "I love you" in chalk on the sidewalk
And had an airplane write it in the sky
But chalk fades away with the wash of the rain
And clouds eventually drift on by

I was waiting for you to tell the world
I was waiting for "I love you" to be carved in stone
But the world remained uninformed
And I....I ended up alone

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Monday, November 3 2003, 09:10 pm

Loveable LindzAy!

This poem is wonderful. i love it! so beutifully written great job!

Leah kendall
LinzAy (24.27.239.180) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 10:51 pm

06

Thanks!! :)
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Sunday, November 9 2003, 01:13 am

Loved it

I really like this piece of work. Excellent job
LinzAy (24.95.228.105) -- Wednesday, November 19 2003, 10:41 pm

Stacey

Thankyou! :D
HEAVEN (68.43.99.209) -- Monday, December 22 2003, 06:24 am

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THATS ALL SO TRUE
LinzAy (65.35.22.28) -- Tuesday, December 23 2003, 05:36 am

heaven

.....:( unfortunately
 
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