Madness
7 May, 2003
Author: LinzAy
A wild animal
Eating at your heart
A deadly virus
Tearing you apart
Someone holding your hand
Then talking behind your back
A serial killer
Ready to attack
A high five
Then a sudden slap across the face
Needing a gun
Just in case
Seeing someone
You'd like to hurt
Wanting to love someone
But treating them like dirt
Looking in the mirror
Waiting for the glass to shatter
Stealing things
That don't really matter
Taking drugs
Hoping to escape
A night of love
Ending up in rape
Doing things
That mess with your head
Things that cause you
To end up dead
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Seizure (65.164.72.2) -- Thursday, May 8 2003, 01:44 pm good flow and subject matter. i liked it. |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.199) -- Thursday, May 8 2003, 10:12 pm Thankya Seiz! Glad ya ilked it :D |
| Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 12:23 am Great poem! It is madness, all of this really happens in everyday life. Great work! |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.166) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 12:55 am Thankyou 06! :D total madness...... |
| CrYsTaL (204.32.65.120) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 03:37 am So true, it seems like thats all it is in the world. Great poem! |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.199) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 05:53 am Thankyou :) I was actually very mad at someone when i wrote this poem and just wrote everything that i was mad about at the time..... |
| Brenda Michelle (209.178.183.148) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 07:25 am this is a great poem! u are a great poet and i love your poetry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| LinzAy (152.163.188.199) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 07:44 am Thankyou so much!!! :D :D |
| Pamela (194.125.159.27) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 06:44 pm LinzAy, I never knew you had this side to you. Guess what? I like it! Wicked poem. |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.166) -- Friday, May 9 2003, 07:34 pm Hehe....ya like, ya like? :) glad you do! Thanks a bunch :D |
| megzy (67.195.249.30) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 12:19 am i loved it .... u juss described how almsot every 1 feels wen they r angry. good job.. keep up the good work. =) |
| LinzAy (64.12.96.102) -- Thursday, May 15 2003, 11:03 pm Thanks :D |
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