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Sung Through Tears
21 March, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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Remembered kisses haunt my thoughts
A lost touch embraces my soul
Deafened by voices that are now unknown
Stolen parts leave me unwhole

Memories of you holding me
I'm remembering us together for those years
My heart is crying, my heart is sadly singing
A song sung for you through tears

That moment that made me feel so alive
- Remembering it now makes me feel dead
I'm empty inside, almost all cried out
Images of you keep running through my head

Memories of you speaking your love for me
Remembering you putting to ease all my fears
My heart is crying, my heart is sadly singing
A song sung for you through tears

Remembering the tears I cried when you left
The pain still has hold of my heart
Haven't felt happiness since we had to say good-bye
Your memory is tearing me apart

Memories of you being with me
Remembering all the sweet nothings whispered into my ears
My heart is crying, my heart is sadly singing
A song sung for you through tears

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (67.29.163.135) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 05:35 am

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wow linzay i can tell you poured out your heart and soul. Its never easy going through somethin like a break up or losing someone. ive been through it before and i know ...atleast a little bit how you feel. good poem!
LinzAy (205.188.208.75) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 07:01 am

A little of how i feel

That little bit that you know i feel is probably the little bit of my heart that i putinto it. I didn't quite pour my heart out. I just used a little of how i use to feel and exaggerated a little. And a lot of stuff in the poem i've never really experienced...for instance, someone telling me they love me.....besides family, never happened. And i've never been with anybody for more than technically 2 months so the years thing was obviously exaggeration, but there was a little truth to the poem....the verse that says something abuot a moment that use to make me feel alive now making me feel dead.......

glad ya liked it tho ev and that my exaggeration was able to be felt real
everett (67.29.163.135) -- Tuesday, April 29 2003, 07:06 am

oh ok..

ive done the same thing...ive used my imagination to exxagerate my feelings with an experience i had before
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 01:23 am

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Oh Linsay this is really beautiful. I really enjoyed reading!
Roy (152.163.188.70) -- Saturday, May 3 2003, 05:47 am

This is the Fonz

Your beauty maybe not some imagination---matter fact-- just "Sung through Tears" silly as I am I can hear your voice and reach out to touch you with my hand to say thank you very much---you have a way of touching my heart
LinzAy (205.188.209.140) -- Tuesday, May 6 2003, 03:45 am

Cap and Roy

Cap....thankyou so much :D glad you enjoyed it!!

Rpy....Aw! thankyou!! I'm glad you liked it as much as you did and that you could "hear" me singing:)
 
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