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I Smiled
Author: LinzAy

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I traced over words you wrote me in a letter
Traced over them with my fingertips
And rememered your touch
And the feel of your lips

I smiled at the memory
Not at the thought of you
There is a difference there
Though most don't believe that to be true

I smiled at the memory
Why would I smile at the thought of someone who brings me such disgust
I wouldn't
Though most consider reminiscing lust

I stare at blank words that once meant something
And I smiled at what they use to mean
Not at wishful thinking
Not at something people still think I want to be

You can smile at a lost meaning
Doesn't mean you want it back
Doesn't mean you miss it
Just means it's one more memory you've still got on track

I traced over your signature
And I smiled at your name
I smiled because you'er a memory
And because I'm no longer someone being played in your game

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (68.74.127.159) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 07:56 pm

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i hate it yet i love it.. the more i read it the more i hate it but themore i want to read it.. brings back so many memories.. yet i dont know if i should thank you or not.. or im just breaking down.. ha.. um yeah..

anyways.. good poem.. especially that last stanza.. keep on writng
LinzAy (152.163.188.163) -- Thursday, April 17 2003, 10:04 pm

Luc.....

Darn! you confused me!! started breaking me down!! Hehe, naw...you know i'm only playin! Sorry it brought back so many memories.....but glad ya liked it, or hated it, or liked it............
everett (67.29.160.4) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 02:52 am

wow

brought back memories for me too. i liked it, thought it expressed your feelings very well.
LinzAy (205.188.208.105) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 03:44 am

Memories....

Yeah, i feel it expressed my feelings pretty good too.......Thankyou for ur comment Ev...
LinzAy (205.188.208.105) -- Friday, April 18 2003, 03:44 am

Memories....

Yeah, i feel it expressed my feelings pretty good too.......Thankyou for ur comment Ev...
Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Saturday, April 19 2003, 10:24 pm

~*~ L I N Z A Y ~*~

This poem is muy bonita!!
You write some of the sweetest stuff.
I truely admire your work.
" you go girl!! "

~*~ Stace ~*~
RinRin (24.211.200.202) -- Sunday, April 20 2003, 12:07 am

touched!!

wow....LinzAy, those words just touched my heart! It made me realize a lot of things I didn't understand before...again, wow! no other words could describe this as well as yours!
LinzAy (152.163.188.163) -- Sunday, April 20 2003, 05:37 am

Stace and Rin

Stace~Thankyou so much Stace!! The spanish confused me at first but i got it after a sec....and it's kinda sad really cuz i'm half puerto rican! lol....thankyou for your sweet comment!

Rin~Glad someone that hadn't realized this before read it and understood....glad you liked the poem Rin! Thankyou for the comment! :D
 
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