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Crawl
7 April, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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Deafened by our voices you cover your ears

CRAWL!

Voices streaming through your brain
Images circling your head
Insanity's closing in
Sick of the life that you've been fed
Artwork up and down your arms
Scars across your wrist
You've never known happiness
So there's nothing here to miss

CRAWL!
Into the corner that calls out your name
CRAWL!
Just to escape lifes little game
CRAWL!
And repeat to yourself you're nothing but a name
FALL!
Down......into the pain of shame

Standing in the vomit that's been spewed from your eyes
You'er weakening, growing numb
Other attempts haven't been successful
But this one should be fun
Make your way through the vomit
Down way too many pills
Darkness engulfs you
You're desire you've fulfilled

FALL!
Backwards into the vomit of tears
FALL!
Away from all your years
FALL!
Escaping all your fears
CRAWL!
Away from your life unclear

Deafened by your own voice......you die

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Dino (67.24.224.238) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 07:08 am

Holly Molly!

This made me CRAWL! WOW! I like this! Very nice LinzAy.
LinzAy (64.12.96.8) -- Friday, April 11 2003, 08:42 pm

Dino.....

Thankyou Dino!!!!
everett (67.29.162.218) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:23 am

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this poem sounds like it would be a awesome song!
LinzAy (205.188.208.135) -- Monday, April 14 2003, 04:56 am

Ev...

Yea...i wrote ir with a beat and crap in my head......thankyou Ev!!
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 12:57 am

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Wow!....Strong words LinzAy...very moving stuff!
Capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 12:57 am

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Wow!....Strong words LinzAy...very moving stuff!
LinzAy (205.188.208.135) -- Tuesday, April 15 2003, 03:57 am

Capricorn

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