Fallen Angel
31 March, 2003
Author: LinzAy
Fallen angel, down on her hands and knees
Soaked ground, wet from the emotions she bleeds
Shaken hands, troubled mind
Spinning world, slowing time
Hit so hard with words none would want to hear
Tears blurring her vision, no longer does anything look clear
Fallen angel, no one stopping to give her a helping hand
Trampled wings, being stepped upon by those who don't understand
Torn soul, bleeding heart
Scratched skin, she's ripped apart
Slammed to the ground by the force of hurt
Spitting out what she's been treated like - dirt.
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 01:11 am You've done it again... i absolutely love your work. Your words are beautiful ~Stace |
| Martin Vann (65.57.62.203) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 01:23 am LinzAy; From your dirt, comes the fruit, that feeds an entire nation, from you dirt, we build and entire nation upon solid ground. LinzAy, from dirt, the mother of life upon our earth will you once again, find the nurishment to spread your angel wings, and Fly again! But this time above the dirt, that has caused you this hurt. Fly, my angel, fly, and if, you can be so kind, please, don't pass me by, if, only to say Hi, I'm fine now! Fly my angel, fly. Beautiful poem, bet you didn't know you said all this, but, YOU Did, you angel you. MartinV |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.233) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 05:20 am Stace...thankyou so much for your comment! means a lot!! Martin...a poem within a comment. Thankyou for your words! As always Martin they're taken in and not ignored. And no...heh heh...didn't know i said all that! Thanx Martin Thanx you two! |
| everett (67.29.162.133) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 06:51 am whoa this poem was definatly good! :) its sad yet beautiful |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.233) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 07:32 am hehe...i got a "whoa"!! i got a "whoa"!!! hehe.... Thankyou Everett! I didn't think this one would be too popular but i guess my fallen angel has been accepted! I just don't know where it all came from....maybe i feel like this....amybe i don't. can't tell...i have another poem that confuses me like this....if i remember i'll send it in with next weeks entries |
| capricorn (62.30.217.106) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 01:18 pm This paints a very vivid picture in my mind...one of your best! Beautifully written! |
| LinzAy (152.163.189.233) -- Thursday, April 3 2003, 10:03 pm Thankyou so much Cap!! |
| anonymous (24.62.189.240) -- Wednesday, February 2 2005, 02:30 am This was an amazing poem. |
| Udiah (184.60.115.46) -- Sunday, September 26 2010, 09:37 pm Fear sometimes causes me to overlook the things I should have seen. Your poetry sure hits home. |
| LinzAy (68.83.216.74) -- Thursday, October 14 2010, 12:06 am Thanks you Anonymous! Udiah...I hope everything is okay :) |
| mallisa jackson (96.18.236.164) -- Monday, October 18 2010, 09:06 am i truely enjoyed this there is raw emotion and depth to this which is hard to come by truely an amazing and read |
| LinzAy (68.83.216.74) -- Tuesday, October 26 2010, 03:15 am Thank you :) |
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