Poetic Dreams - Other's Poems - Just As One - Part 1 The Soul - by: LinzAy - submitted: 11 March 2003

When two hearts beat together just as one
The universe seems such a smaller place
All obstacles are so easy to overcome
When held in eachothers embrace
The depth of ones soul becomes more shallow
Just as the others does
Yet, now combined, are more deep than any soul could ever be
And nothing is as it was
Ones soul, now shallow-yet so deep
Something that only true love does
What was once a bottomless hole of emotions is now understood
The soul-now known-is no longer as it was
Something changes when another's soul is holding yours
When another looks into your eyes and just knows
Knows everything you feel and everything you desire
And as it changes it shows
Oblivious to any hate surrounding you and your other
Oblivious to hate because so much love fills the hearts of two
Two hearts that have changed and now become one
One heart. One soul. One love. So true.

everett (209.240.212.228) -- Sunday, March 16 2003, 06:32 am

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again...awesome writing! I always enjoy reading your poems..good stuff!

LinzAy (205.188.208.168) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 06:11 am

Everett
Thanx boi!! I have 3 other parts to this thing...i wrote it a friends house...was drinking O.J. and the next thing i knew i looked at my hand and i was writing! hehe..well that's almost exactly how it went...

LinzAy (152.163.188.229) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 06:55 am

Everett...again, hehe
Hey Ev! I have another poem on here that didnt make it this weeks poems for some reason, i think you'd like it.....it's called "Her"

everett (67.29.160.34) -- Tuesday, March 18 2003, 06:00 am

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im about to check it out! :)

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