Her by LinzAy

I look at her face
And see her frown
I wonder why she cries
Features traced
Looked her up and down
And watch as she feels her soul die
Emotions not at peace
Surrounded, but alone she stands
Wanting all pain to be free
Falling down on her knees
Face cupped in her hands
Sobbing uncontrollably
For her I pray
For the next to be bright
And not be nearly as bad
Then I look away
Can't stand the sight
To be seeing somebody so sad
But still I feel
And hear her tears
And her pain that dwells inside
So I turn back to what's real
Look again in the mirrors
Can't believe all the tears I just cried

everett (67.29.160.34) -- Tuesday, March 18 2003, 06:05 am

!
Whoa Linzay that was really good! I loved the ending..i liked it!!

LinzAy (64.12.96.73) -- Tuesday, March 18 2003, 11:09 am

Though ya mite have!
hehe...thought you mite have liked this one. It's one of my per-ska-nal faves:)

Sunshine (168.184.90.11) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 04:42 pm

oh my
This one is amazing. I like the twist of it all. Its so beautiful and yet sad to see that she feels this way;

I think I read into your poems a little to much...but I love too! You cant make me stop!

LinzAy (205.188.208.43) -- Monday, April 21 2003, 05:43 pm

too much
naw.....you read into my poems just right buddy!!

Thankyou for the comment buddy!!!
luv ya!

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