All Obscurity Subjected
11 March, 2003
Author: LinzAy
I feel I need to talk to you
Just let these words flow out
I don't know, really, what we'll say
Or exactly what it will be about
But everytime I talk to you
The conversation ends with much unsaid
I feel this in my heart
But the words won't compute in my head
The things we aren't saying
Are building up inside of me
And one day they'll come gushing out
Though I don't know when that'll be
We need to speak to eachother
About more than just the daily things
We need to sit face to face
And start from the beginning
I want to know your feelings
And want you to understand mine
So that we won't be confused
Or feel we're wasting all our time
I want us to communicate better
Get inside one another's head
Have all our thoughts out in the open
And all obscurity subjected
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| everett (209.240.212.236) -- Sunday, March 16 2003, 06:28 am good stuff as usual.... excellent poem! |
| LinzAy (205.188.208.136) -- Tuesday, April 22 2003, 04:11 pm LOL! i didn't know anyone commented on this poem! I think i even forgot i sent it in! LOL Thanks for the comment Ev!!! |
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