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Electric Lady
4 February, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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I'll take care of that curving body
That can always grab hold of my soul
You're the only one who knows every single thing I feel
You know me -whole
We are one
All our beauty - All our pain
We are one
Both souls stable yet insane
My Lady, cry me tears from the emotions that flow through your veins
>From the emotions that flow through mine
For we are one at the moment
Our hearts are together in rythym - in time
Allow me to hear the anger that we hide inside our hearts
The anger that needs its release
For when we are put together we are just one
A beautiful, emotional beast
I want our pain to be free
Sing unto those who are willing to hear
I'm not afraid to let ourselves pour out
Although it's something that without you I fear
But also show me, Lady, the beautiful part of you
And of me
I'd like to hear how beautiful we are
I'd like to feel the beauty everyone else sees
My pain is yours - as well as my soul
My heart shows itself through you
I'll always need you here for me
And there you'll be - my lady so true

------- Author's Notes -------

This poem, for those of you who aren't guitarists, is about a guitar. My friend Greg is a beautiful guitarist, has his own band-which my boyfriend is in..hehe..but anyways, We were talking about music, our conversations about music get very deep since we're extreme music people! Right April?! Anyways. He started talking to me about the electric guitar
and how it's called the Electric Lady. How she lets you express yourself through her. So I wrote this based on that. Needless to say he loved it...hope you did too

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Sunshine (168.184.78.4) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 03:15 pm

whoah

Wow Girl! You yet amaze me again. I dont fully know how Greg must feel when he lets hiself go on his electric lady.But after reading this- I feel that I have a better insight on to how deep and incredibley emotionaly amazing this insterment is. I so see how Greg loved this poem-of all people.
You are amazing Buddy. I love you for every possible way.
Love you Always... Sunshine
LinzAy (152.163.194.209) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 12:50 pm

Buddy

Aw! thanx buddy! I kinda knew what power (emotion wise) a guitar had over someone if they were really into it. But i got a better understanding and wanted to get a better understanding after getting to know Greg. He's sucha wonderful person, just what you need. I love you too Buddy!!
 
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