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Journey Through Words
4 February, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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Come into my world
Explore all my happiness and pain
With days full of sunshine
And days full of rain
Take a journey through my times
My times of bad and times of good
Times where I can't help but be happy
And times where I definitely could

Maybe you won't understand me
On the other hand, maybe you will
Understand me when I want to jump and scream
Or just take a breath and stand still
Maybe you'll just look blankly at my words
Not let them touch you so you can feel
Or maybe you'll soak them all in
And imagine my words so real

Whether you enjoy this quest or not
Is totally up to you
So try to feel everything I say
And enjoy this world so new

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lori Ann Day (198.81.26.134) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 11:23 am

Beautiful Poem

Words can take you so many places, into the sunshine or out of the rain. Thank you for taking me on a special journey, and into memory lane. You are great!
everett (209.240.212.227) -- Wednesday, March 5 2003, 06:26 pm

agree

I agree with Lori up there. Beautiful poem, words can take us to many places...words are pretty powerful when they come from the heart.
LinzAy (152.163.188.66) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 12:56 pm

Lori and Ev.....

Aw! I'm glad i was able to take ya somewhere with that poem Lori!! I love when my poems do that to even just one person! And thankyou for your comment!!!! Everett...I totally agree with what you said up there. Words are pretty powerful if they truely do come from within....Thankyou! :)
Sunshine (168.184.78.4) -- Thursday, March 6 2003, 04:26 pm

tru

I love the title, it just fits... cause every one of these poems takes me on a journey. Some sad some happy..and some just plain weird. Its a very good way to express yourself. I wish i had just a tad of you talent. Keep on writing girl!
LinzAy (205.188.209.39) -- Sunday, March 9 2003, 07:48 am

buddy......

Aw! you do buddy! you just won't believe me!! hehe....Love Ya!
 
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