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Her Love For Him
11 January, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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A love filled with so much passion
A love just beginning, yet already perfected
We were meant for each other
For it's one another we've always reflected
I have such a desire to keep our love hidden
So that we may remain completely in our own world
Yet at the same time i somehow want the whole world to know
Exactly how this amazing love unfurled
I gaze in your eyes that say so much
And I read them - just as you read so deeply into mine
We think so alike - like we can read eachothers thoughts
Didn't know I'd be swept away in such a short time
Time away from you kills me
My heart longs to feel your touch and taste your kiss
I'm distracted from everything else by thoughts of you
It's you that time makes me miss
I know I'm not over-reacting when i jump into your embrace
Because you're standing there with open arms
And I know you so extremely well
That I can see right through all your lines and witty charms
Hold me my love
Don't ever let me go
Look into my eyes
Kiss me nice and slow
I feel so awesome inside
I've been waiting for this for so long
I Love You Guy
And that love will always stay strong

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.198.63) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 03:34 am

awww

what a perfect poem to hear with Valentines day coming up. very touching... great poem Linzay :)
LinzAy (64.12.96.105) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 07:37 am

Everett

Thanks Everett!!!
Steve (216.66.115.136) -- Monday, February 17 2003, 05:40 pm

Very nice

It sounds like you have found true love LindsAy, I hope it inspires more writing for you. I liked your poem a lot.
LinzAy (64.12.96.105) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 10:16 am

Steve

Thankyou Steve. But the story of this poem is based on my friend April. We're such awesome friends that we know eahcother better than anyone would understand. So i knew exactly how she felt about this guy she's in a relationship with. Thats why it is titled Her love for him. Otherwise i wouldve just named it my love for him. A few if my poems are for her actually...like Strength. Thankyou for your comment!!
Lonlyrockstar (216.54.14.84) -- Monday, February 24 2003, 04:10 pm

OMG

Oh my god thats so true. Like when i'm around him i feel so safe and everything. I can't stop thinkin about expectally when he had to leave. I swear to god i was a mess. I couldn't tell him that i liked him but yet i wanted to. so i deffinitly can relate to this poem you have written. Thanks for bringing good memories back. I still think that i should have told him. Mabye we probably would have been closer in friendship. SO once again i thank you.
lonlyrockstar (216.54.14.84) -- Monday, February 24 2003, 04:12 pm

oh yea

please continue writing beatiful poems. this poem has definitly touched me.
SUNSHINE (168.184.78.3) -- Thursday, February 27 2003, 05:40 pm

You Read My Thoughts

Hey my sweetie,BUDDY! It is so cool to see this poem on here. it gives me chills everytime i read it cause i cant believe that you so deeply know me and feel my thoghts right along with me. Thank you for encouraging me and Greg. this is how i feel about him and im so glad other people can relate.
Your so incredibly talented and blessed. im so happy for you always and i wnat the very best for you that life can give. And you can be sure that ill be there to encourage you all the way. Not to mention all the people you have backing you. Greg loved this poem and knows you'll get somewhere with your talents.
We love you greatly Buddy. no matter where life takes us, youll always be my best friend.

~April~
LinzAy (152.163.188.40) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 10:09 am

Rockstar and April

Lonlyrockstar~~

No-thankyou for being able to feel these words and not just read them. I'm glad they brought back some nice memories for you! And i'll do my best to continue to write poems that can touch you as well as this one did!!

April~~

I'm only able to know how you feel and what you think because we're such close friends. Because we love eachother so much. And i only know wat you think and feel because they're things you unconsciencely tell me and things i unconsciencely pick up on....if that makes any sense to you!

And i only encourage you and Greg because you two are such a perfect match! Gawd...the poem describes it all. Despite those unbearable little things that make him him he's perfect....

And Buddy...I know you'll always be there for me...whether it's for the right thing or not. Just as i hope you know i'll always be there for you! I'm so blessed to have a friend that loves me as much as you do! So blessed to have a friend like you.

As for everyone else..i never really realize anyone else is there for me until someone says...dont forget how much these ppl care about you. And i also feel so blessed and encouraged when everyone else is brought up....so reading your comment just now made me feel so loved and blessed and cared for! Words really do mean more than most people in this world will ever know

I love you April!

~~Lindsay~~
 
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