Broken Love by LinzAy

Oh my precious lover
Where have you gone this time
I can't find you anywhere
Though you claim to be all mine

I needed you just now
To hold and comfort me
But everywhere I searched
You didn't seem to be

I called out your name a million times
And heard not one reply
Are you out there hurting me
Will you come home and make me cry

I don't want to believe it's true
That you could deceive and hurt me so
But what else could it possibly be
Has love for another begun to grow

You promised I’d be safe with you
You promised you’d never lie
But since I’m hurting so bad right now
I’m afraid I must, tearfully, say goodbye

Martin Vann (65.57.57.58) -- Saturday, February 8 2003, 09:11 pm

I can't stand to hear a woman cry, hurt by a 1st class Jerk!
I can feel the hurt here, LinzAY, don't like it at all! It makes me want to protect you from guys like that, well, I'm probably, in there some where also, the Jerk part that is. Anyway, may this jerk of jerks, who has hurt my friend, step upon another sensitive part, that little piece that sits right on top of a LAND MINE! That will cure his ruthless heart.

Very emotional presentation, I felt it. Guess you saw that.

Thanks,
Martin V

LinzAy (64.12.103.36) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 05:05 am

Protect me from those 1st class jerks...
...I wish you could. But i know life deals out pain and i think i've found a way fo me to get around it and somehow forget aboutit a little easier. Some of it's through poetry and some of its through a trash can in my heart that i throw all my pain away in....and bam! it's gone. No one really understands how i can stop hurting and caring so quickly, some dont think i actually do it and that i still hold the pain. But I don't I'm rid of it easily.
As for the 1st class jerk. For a while, 6 months, i had total hatred for him and another. And thru that whole 6 month period someone was trying to teach me something. My Lord was trying to teach me forgiveness. And ii finally understood it. It took him 6 months, but it finally clicked. I'm so thankfulhe didnt give up. For those 6 months that i had hatred in my heart i was sucha bitter person. And with using the lesson God taught me, I forgave them for all the pain and tears they caused me. And i was a new person. SO much weight was lifted off my chest.
So, as for those landmines, i wouldnt wish any sort of pain on him now...it would hurt me to see him go through any sort of pain like that...because we're friends again, though i'm cautious. But in that 6 month period it would have definitely been extremely satisfing to see him hurt so bad.
I'm so thankful for all the friends i've made through poetry......and i'm very glad you're one of them!

LinzAy (64.12.103.36) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 05:08 am

continuing the last comment
if not, i wouldnt have these long interesting comments, that make me think, to read and reply to. I'm glad you were able to feel this poem, though i'm sorry it mad you hurt for me....it did put a smile on my face though to know that someone i truely only communicate with through poems would want to protect me like that. Thankyou for your friendship.
~Lindsay

P.S. What are "the basics of K.I.S.S."?

LinzAy (152.163.194.183) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 09:06 am

KISS
Okay...i know what it means now that i read your comment on the other poem Martin....:)

Martin Vann (67.75.181.179) -- Monday, February 10 2003, 03:48 pm

As you have time...,
Dreamer recently posted another work of mine called, Courage Of The Poet's Pen. Somehow, you are in there, its is a poem for all of us who sometimes feel lost. I wouldn't really, wish landmine pain on anyone, it was as you took it, a protective gesture. Glad you are managing the hurt and have the comfort of your lord.

Martin

Martin

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