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Dieing
21 January, 2003
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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I'm not afraid to die.
Just don't want to say good-bye.

So much to do and say.
I think I'd like to stay.

It took 50 years to find what I
like to do.

Would like 50 years to enjoy it too.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.36.181.99) -- Wednesday, January 22 2003, 06:11 am


this actually made me smile. and i thank you for that barb. :) those first two line. yes i know how you feel. nice one.
LinzAy (64.12.96.138) -- Wednesday, January 22 2003, 08:45 am

......

Luc said everything i was gonna......hmm....not fair!!! hehe......cute poem Barb
Capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Wednesday, January 22 2003, 11:57 am

lovely

What a lovely poem with reflecting thoughts.I think this is one of your best, I really liked it.I feel so much the same as you have described.
barb (66.46.230.220) -- Wednesday, January 22 2003, 02:44 pm

thank-you all

who would think death would get good comments.Hhha
Pamela (66.38.146.118) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 03:18 am

Agreed

*Applauds Barb*
Wow! Wicked poem, so positive. I like the last two lines the best - and damnit, you deserve to enjoy it! Power to ya :O)
Pamela (66.38.146.118) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 03:19 am

One more thing....

I also think its your best.
barb (66.46.230.160) -- Thursday, January 23 2003, 04:20 am

gee thanks

all I was thinking about was my test for my mri to see if tumour is growing back. but it's not yehhhhhh. so before I went thought about this. what a wuzz I know.Hhhha
dominique hatchell (64.12.96.232) -- Friday, March 14 2003, 04:13 am

are you there

that was very wonderful keep up thr good work! i'm onley 15 and when i grow up i hope i write as good as you
barb (66.46.241.31) -- Monday, March 17 2003, 03:49 am

awww

that's the nicest compliment I could get thank-you. All I do is write how I feel and it comes out like this never give up something you love to do
Meridian (152.163.252.198) -- Monday, March 1 2004, 07:27 pm

Don't we all?

I hope to live to be 100 too. Great one, Ms. Goodhew!
Capricorn (82.36.129.85) -- Wednesday, March 3 2004, 02:36 am

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Barb ... it is great to read your wise words again. I have missed you! Great sentiments here in you writing.
 
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