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Another One Bites The Dust
30 January, 2003
Author: LinzAy

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Holding the wheel, sitting in the seat
Your heart skipping only a couple beats
Revving your engine, showing your power
Seems it's only been a couple minutes - But it's really been an hour
And, finally, right now - you're waiting for the go
With no intentions of going slow
Rev one more time - look into your opponents eyes
Smile 'cause you know you're saying your goodbyes
The signals down - you're peeling away
Your heart's beating faster - you love to play
You quickly reach 60, that soon turns to a hundred and more
You leave behind as you feel yourself soar
So he usees a boost, he's coming up fast
But there's no way you're coming in last
You're swithcing gears, listening to your turbo thrust
But you need something more - you hit your NOS
You're pushed against you seat - holding tightly onto the wheel
This was always your dream - you never thought it would be real
Everything's passing faster than ever thought
Noone had a clue of all the power you brought
You know you've won and love knowing that, in your car, you can trust
And as the saying goes "Another One Bites The Dust"

------- Author's Notes -------

That poem is dedicated to my brother who is a Fast and the Furious, street racing fanatic freak! Love you dude!!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

capricorn (62.31.144.1) -- Sunday, February 2 2003, 12:25 am


I was riding with him LinzAy, all the way, that's how good this was
Catch da Geezer! (67.24.56.190) -- Sunday, February 2 2003, 07:37 am

Speed fanatics!

You got my adrenaline up now LinzAy. I just love this poem, being a racer myself, only on dirtbikes. Been in 1st place many times and know what it takes to knock your compitition down. Great piece of work, a good poet! I bite the dust too, face plant the dirt and mud. He,he,heeeeee
martin vann (67.28.93.115) -- Sunday, February 2 2003, 10:46 pm

Going Fast can be a blast

I to know the "need for Speed" have a Cobra Mustang with the Mystic paint. Your brother has more than a fast machine, he has sister that shares his thrills. She writes with knowledge of how he feels. I think you two are close, that was the best part of your poem to me, other than, you made me feel, his need for speed. He owes you a doubble cheese burger, fries and large coke for this one.

Thanks, LinzAy, had a great ride!

Martin
everett (209.240.198.61) -- Monday, February 3 2003, 03:45 am

hey

Nice poem. i can relate since i street race occasionally....and to think i got it from my dad who does it all the time. great poem.
LinzAy (152.163.201.69) -- Monday, February 3 2003, 08:52 am

ATTN: All Speed Junkies!!!

Thanks for all the comments guys!! I wa shoping it would get ur adrenaline up there a lil and that ya would feel like you're racing!....Yea, me and my bro are close.....same with me and my other sibs...close family i guess.....ooo...and i wouldnt mind a burge fries and coke, from Steak-n-shake that is!! hehe..glad you all enjoyed the ride!!
 
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