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Silence
Author: LinzAy

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It's so quiet.
There's so much noise. But it's over-ruled by silence.
A silence of hope.
Desperation.
A sad silence, one that makes your eyes tear, but not quite cry.
Turn verything to it's loudest volume
and still there's nothing you hear but silence.
So quiet you want to speak, but it wouldn't matter.
You wouldn't be heard.
SIlence is the loudest thing right now.
Too loud.
A defeaning silence.
Hurting, painful, sad.
Make it go away.
Helo me retrieve sound.
Push silence away from me so I can hear the words you're saying, the words you're speaking to me.
I wish I could hear them now.
Are they pleasant? Are they inspiring?
I can't tell.
All I can hear is silence.
Nothing else.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

everett (209.240.198.63) -- Monday, January 20 2003, 03:32 am

:)

hey Linzay, this is another great poem you've written. A Deafeaning silence, ive been there before.
LinzAy (64.12.96.79) -- Monday, January 20 2003, 07:48 am

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Thanx Everett.......the day i wrote that everything was weird at home and very quiet....couldn't pass up that poetic moment!! hehe
everett (209.240.198.63) -- Monday, January 20 2003, 05:21 pm

ah yes,

cant pass up a poetic moment! good to see you took advantage of that time and wrote an awesome poem. woohoo lol
LinzAy (152.163.189.135) -- Monday, January 20 2003, 05:58 pm

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Hehe...ur such a weird person......but i'm even more so!!! hehe......o and uh thanx again....haha
 
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