When I Realize by LinzAy

When the sunlight fills the morning sky
When the dark night says its goodbye
When I look into your beautiful eyes
I realize how good my day will go by

When the wind stirs the trees
When the leaves fly in the breeze
When I don't have to ask please
I realize it's you that shakes my knees

When the rain waters the ground
When the thunder makes that sound
When I see it's you I've found
I realize your the one making my heart pound

When the world continues it's eternal turn
When the forest fires no longer burn
When I see how much you've helped me learn
I realize it's your love I've earned

Seizure (68.155.218.237) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 09:58 am

Great poem
That was really well written. Nothing like having a day full of negative stuff to be set at ease by writings such as this. Good job.

LinzAY (209.240.198.60) -- Thursday, October 24 2002, 08:01 pm

How nice
Aw...thanks, um, i'll call ya seizure! hehe......but yea...thanks! I'm glad u liked it! O hey, i went to that mp3 place to listen to some of ur stuff.....awesome!

barb (206.191.91.80) -- Friday, October 25 2002, 03:43 pm

positive thinking nice
Linzay seizure's right very good

LinzAy (152.163.189.204) -- Sunday, November 17 2002, 07:01 am

Barb
Thanks Barb

Ghost (216.148.244.38) -- Thursday, February 13 2003, 03:38 am

hey by the way
way back when, you commented on the poem Fantasy, i wanted to thank you for the comment as that particular poem was written when i was about 11......i just seemed to cherish it. Ill begin writing again and maybe soon ill catch up to people like barb, luc, seizure, and you too! well have a good day! i wont...^^

LinzAy (152.163.201.197) -- Friday, February 14 2003, 08:55 am

Ghost....
Hey! I honestly can't remember the poem...andi can't find it either to refresh my memory....i looked for a while actually! :) Maybe you could ask Becky for my addy to send it to me so that i can remember. But uh, if i commented on it i must like how ya write so i cant wait to see more of ur stuff on here! Hehe, and with ur comment up there^ i didnt realize i was in a league with those great poets up there!! that really means a lot to me! Thankyou for your comment!!!
As far as Wednesday, it was kewl......i'm sorry you didnt feel like you'd have a good day... i hope you did though!!!!

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