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Promises
Author: Lisa Anne

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As I lay here beside you, I watch you sleep
I never imagined these feelings so deep

Carefully, I watch every breath that you take
Thinking of Promises I'd like to make

Seeing your chest rise and fall
It's now that I realize, "I have it All"

Your Heart's Desire is what I would give you
For making me feel the way that you do

I want to be able to give you so much
All I ask in return is your gentle touch!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

nila (195.93.33.14) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 04:09 am

awww

so beautiful and touching,
barb (209.112.24.18) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 08:40 pm

very good

I love this kind of writing Lisa so observing and loving nice thanks for sharing.
Terrie* (65.150.174.155) -- Sunday, September 12 2004, 08:54 pm

Lisa Anne, i can rso elate....to your every word..

same as any other female that is in-love with their soul-mate..lovely to have someone pick into our heart and lay it all out...this was delicate and lovely to the touch of ones heart...
beautifuly put..thanx for sharing our hearts through the words of your heart..
Carol (152.163.100.5) -- Monday, December 11 2006, 05:54 am

Promises

So beautifully Written, so deeply felt. Wonderful.
 
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