Author: Lola


The tears are flowing
Staining my cheeks
Everything is blurry.
No one to talk to
No one to love me or care.
Friends trying to be there
Asking me what's wrong
I don't know what to say
Something is wrong
But I'm not sure what.
My second father is gone
That's who I miss the most
I'll never see him again
He'll never be there to catch my fall.
The man I fell in love with
Hates my f***ing guts!
He's in love with my worst enemy
He believes all her bull-s**t lies.
No one believes me anymore
Some probably think
I'm crying for attention
But the truth is, I don't know why I'm crying
I couldn't tell you.
Every time I gain a new friend
I lose her/him within a month or so
Love is hopeless,
Friendship is hopeless
I'll never be the same.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 ( -- Monday, April 21 2003, 04:55 pm


I will always be here if you need somone to talk to, ill be your friend. This poem was awsome! I love the way it presented itself on so many levels. Great job!
Tarna ( -- Thursday, April 24 2003, 05:06 am

believeing her lies

believing her lies will be his own punishment. I feel sad for your pain but one day the right people will see the true you underneath your tears...
Name:                                           Remember Me

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