With You
Author: Lola


It started just a
Few months ago
I don't know why
Maybe for the status
For being a couple
On campus,
I thought it was good
That once again
I had a boyfriend.
We got to know
Each other better.
Closer and closer
We got everyday.
I started falling for you
Deeper and deeper
Into the light.
I didn't know what had
Come over me,
I wasn't sure.
It took me a while and
I finally knew
I was in love,
In love with someone
Like you!
I told you how I felt
And you said it back.
Whenever I was around you
I felt so great,
I felt desirable,
So many things,
In so little time.
Our naked bodies
Pressed one another
Felt so nice.
The kisses you gave me,
Were like presents from
All the angels above,
The way you looked at me
Made me feel like I was everything to you,
I had no more worries,
I needed nothing else in the world,
I had everything I could ever want
Sitting right before me,
The love of my life,
Was all I ever needed.
With you, I was the
Happiest person alive.
Now we are apart,
And all my dreams are gone,
My heart is shattered into
A million pieces.
Moving on, realizing that we are through,
Knowing that there will never
Be an us again,
Is the hardest thing I ever have to do.
I know I will never be over you,
I'll never love the same,
Unless it's with you.


Comments on this poem/writing:

Leah06 ( -- Monday, April 21 2003, 05:27 pm

Nice job!

I loved this poem. I cant say i know how you feel because i have never fallen in love with somone or have somone fall in love with me. But i can say that this poem is awsome!
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