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Venting
Author: Barbara Goodhew

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Somedays you want to complain.
Being put off is a pain.

But if they think you are meek.
They also think you are weak.

Be a pain that doesn't go away.
When you know you are right don't sway.
I know some wish I would go away.

I would,if they would let me speak.
And stop treating me like I'm weak

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (64.108.204.156) -- Tuesday, November 26 2002, 04:52 am

.............

nicely said barb. beautifully written.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Tuesday, November 26 2002, 01:14 pm

Good

Well said Barb, being a pain is sometimes the only way you get people to listen.good poem
Barb (216.123.56.190) -- Tuesday, November 26 2002, 02:01 pm

frustrated

thanks Luc and cap Ii 'm frustrated I've been trying to get an answer for 2 yrs. they keep putting me off by saying they'll be something in the mail and likeb a dummy I believed them then phoned yesterdaqy to ask when I would get it got the answering machine that said they are on holidays til mon. so wait again. Thats why I wrote the poem.
Capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Tuesday, November 26 2002, 03:15 pm

Keep trying

Keep trying Barb - I've been there when people won't give you an answer, you just have to keep at it, show them you won't give up!You might make yourself unpopular ( I have !) but they have to learn to respect you by answering.
barb (216.123.57.144) -- Wednesday, November 27 2002, 04:57 am

needed that

thank-you cap for the push. I thought it was my speech but you had trouble too.
 
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