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What I Feel
Author: Marci

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My mind wanders constantly
Wishful thinking of how I want life to be
Daydreams I wish people could see
They don't know what it's like to be me...
to never succeed
Everything seems so great
Even my life that someone else somehow dictates
maybe it is my fate
to get love disguised as hate
The hurtful words corrupt my mind
what I hear is never kind
And I look deep inside to find
that my heart is completely blind
..and I am left behind
So I pretend to be okay
and I cry as I begin to pray
There isn't much to say.....
besides, how did I end up this way?
Its constant everyday
God, please take the pain away
I fear that it has been to long
for me to somehow become strong
And I know to live in fear is wrong
that fear of thinking you don't belong
I envy those who are emotionally free
those who do succeed, but
they don't know what it's like to be me
...They cannot see

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LUC (67.36.189.12) -- Tuesday, January 7 2003, 12:35 pm

wow

i love this poem much. "so i pretend to be okay and i cry as i begin to pray" especially those two line. ... anywyas. i can see your pain. where you coming from and such. nicely expressed. this feeling, not sure the right word at the moment but yes its not easy to express yet you have wonderfully.. keep up the great work.
Marci (204.248.60.10) -- Tuesday, January 7 2003, 10:33 pm

Thank you :o)

I really do appreciate the nice things you said. They mean alot. I have been reading everything that you have written....very powerful, I love it :o)
shan (205.188.209.37) -- Wednesday, August 20 2003, 12:56 am

LUV IT

this is one of my favorite poems.. you made me feel every word of it. i can relate to it.. and it's well... lol it's just great. keep it up! i hope to see more of your writing soon. gutta luv it
Lauren (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 08:53 pm

Touching

This poem was very touching. I thought it was very real. I felt it. This poem is wonderful
Karen (205.188.116.200) -- Monday, May 24 2004, 09:00 pm

Write more

"What I feel" is the best poem I have ever read. I was reminded of what's real in life. The beauty and the sadness. I feel that someone completely understands and feels what I feel. The poetry was completely amazing. I was awed by what I read. I have read a lot of poetry, nothing compares to the emotion in this poem. Please, don't ever change this poem. I love it. I'm very impressed with your work and will continue to read all the available poems by Marci. Thank you for the gift you have given us all by sharing this poem. Thank you!
Marci (204.248.60.10) -- Wednesday, January 12 2005, 06:56 pm

Thank you

Karen, I appreciate your kind words. I'm glad that I'm able to touch people with my words. I hope to get some more posted soon. Thank you so much!
 
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