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Where Were You?
6 December, 2003
Author: Marie

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When I needed you the most,
You were never there.
I had a dream that I was killed,
Woke up crying and went to find you, you weren't there,
Where were you?

I needed to talk to you,
But you were to busy with yourself.
You ask why we don't talk why I don't tell you things,
I say because nothing's wrong and you believe me.
When I needed you the most, you weren't there,
Where were you?

I needed someone to hold me,
Tell me that I'm loved.
But you were never there you were away at "work,"
I called where you "worked", they said you were too busy.
When I needed you the most, you weren't there,
Where were you?

When I needed a shoulder to cry on,
And tell me everything will be okay.
You were out and I wouldn't see you for hours,
So when you got home, I acted, as nothing was wrong.
You were never there for me,
Where were you?

You see the pain in my eyes,
But yet you seem to act, as nothing's the matter.
I try to tell you what's wrong, and every time you ignore me,
You're too busy watching T.V. or getting ready to go out.
When I needed you to be here for me, you weren't there,
Where were you?

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Comments on this poem/writing:

blueberry (67.30.178.42) -- Tuesday, April 8 2003, 12:53 pm

the same

I had the same thing happen to me but insteed of them working she was always with some one else .and leaving me be hind and never paying any respect to me .
Dolphin (212.50.181.147) -- Thursday, August 7 2003, 08:43 pm

Where Were You

This Describes My Feelings About My Mum, She Was Never There For Me, It Was Always My Nan Who Was There For Me. Now I No Longer Speak To Her And She Only Lives Around The Corner I Don'T Miss Her 1 Little Bit!!! Your Feelings Really Do You Justice In This Poem I Can Feel Your Lonelyness & Emptyness....Brilliant Piece Of Writing
marie blanton (198.81.26.143) -- Wednesday, November 19 2003, 09:25 am

i like ur poem

I like ur poem a lot, its kinda of whats going on in my life with my mom & I. well I have o be going now. Bye
 
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