Shooting Stars by ShyHeart

My words, are riding on a shooting star
The heat and speed, carry them far
Surely, they, will reach their mark…,
Every word is heading, straight for your heart!

At first, I was humble, careful with my words
Since then, we have shared our souls,
Become, much, more than friends
Now, a braver heart, steps in

My heart is riding, on a shooting star
Burning up, heading, straight, for your heart!
Sometimes I think, I’m out of line
But, I always speak, what is on my mind

I’m sorry if, my words, ever embarrassed you
I offer no apology, my heart is locked, within
This burning star, now, look up at me,
I’m headed straight, for your heart!

I’ve heard stories, that a shooting star
Means, that someone, has just died
Guess, that story-teller, didn’t realize
Shooting stars, are angels…,

“Writing words of love…, across the sky”

Terrie* (65.150.170.2) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 05:44 am

very desirable....
Martin, this too was beautifully written...your fine poetry has a way of captivating me as a reader i'm sure it does others as well.....it really rocks! i got lost there for awhile until my son reminded me it was time to get ready for work :) thank you for sharing such precious passionate poetry....

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Thursday, October 23 2003, 08:19 pm

UM...
This is an amazing poem! I feel i can connect to it in so many ways, and it makes me like this poem even more. Not only do i want to say think you for writing this poem, but i would also like to add in my appritiation to you and all you have done. I enjoy ever single one of your comments. Thank you for always giving your all!

Love always,
N Leah

Martin Vann (171.75.208.78) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 02:36 pm

N Leah, this poem was just my way of saying...,
My N. Leah06

Darlin, this was just my way of letting you know, being shot down, is not always a bad thing. Be the Star that you are, and write your love across the shy, you are your own, wings, fly baby fly.

UM

Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 08:15 pm

For me...?
Like i said yesterday, this is a beutiful poem. This was for me?

Martin Vann (171.75.207.130) -- Friday, October 24 2003, 09:03 pm

Yes it was for you!
Yes, it was for you, need I say more?

UM

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Saturday, October 25 2003, 12:03 am

!!!!!
Thank you so much! This is verry sweet of you! I love it. And if there is more to say, then say it.

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