Lonely Heart by ShyHeart

How lonely, can one heart be, look up at the sky, and you will see
The bright, full moon and all the stars, I’m the only cloud, passing by

How lonely, can one heart be, write a love song, with no melody
Then sing it to your self, that’s how lonely, one heart, can be

I’m drifting, lost in a cloud, that’s passing, in front of the moon
and I’m hurting, still loving you, as I pray, for the morning sun.

Let the sunshine, dry my eyes, and may your heart’s beat
Remember me, before the sunlight, fades away,
and I pass again, alone, in front of the moon…,

luc (68.74.145.89) -- Tuesday, August 12 2003, 03:58 pm

wow
simply wow. I LOVED it.. seriously.. the first one was nice, and sweet, then into the second stanza and to the end.. it was wow.. hehe.. good job.. :)

Pamela (194.125.158.50) -- Tuesday, August 12 2003, 10:29 pm

Agreed
Um, wow is all I have to say. WOW.

Martin V (171.75.207.219) -- Wednesday, August 13 2003, 07:54 pm

Thank you, Thank you, very much
Luc & Pam,

I guess we have all stood alone in front of the moon at one time or another.

Thanks again,
Martin

Faith (24.86.116.97) -- Sunday, August 24 2003, 01:34 am

Awesome Poem
Not only do I love this poem but I so can relate to it right. Keep up the great work I enjoy reading your poems!

Leah06 (12.232.5.189) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 12:38 am

Uncle Martin!
Wow! This is an amazing poem! I love it! I know how you feel too! Great words, that touched my soul and will stay with me forever! Again great job!

Love always,
Leah

Stacey (68.82.126.206) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 01:35 pm

Absolutely Beautiful
What beautiful words seep from thou pen.
Love it

~ Stace

MartinVann (171.75.221.79) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 03:08 pm

We have all felt this way, I think.
Faith, Leah06. Stacey;

Thank you, just a simple thought, simple words.

Thank You,
MartinV

Terrie* (65.150.170.205) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 10:26 pm

was there just last night...
Martin, the beauty of this poem is beyond earthly comments...you know our souls too well....i am lost for words..I loved this...thank you ...Terrie

Martin Vann (171.75.207.198) -- Friday, September 12 2003, 10:55 pm

As Poets, We Know, Love & Share Our Souls..,
Terrie,

With out a doubt, you are an addicted, romantic, in love with love, sometimes it seems to vanish, for we are mortal. Yet, love comes back again, found in a stranger's eyes, sometimes from a friend. Love is a fleeting heart-beat, full of warmth and understanding, then again, it can dissapear.

Thank God, for our poetic pen, we bring love back again, once a stranger, now, a friend, who understands. We are the love, that flows, through the poet's pen.

I thank you, Terrie, soul-mate to my pen!
MartinV

Terrie* (65.148.209.187) -- Saturday, September 13 2003, 03:02 am

Martin..........
yeap... true romantic-addict...
that is i...i must admit...
in love w/love....
something i hope never ever to grow out of:)
Thank You! for such sweet comments...
i...ah...ah..do not know what to say:)

martinV (171.75.207.235) -- Saturday, January 10 2004, 10:50 pm

Lonely Heart, its good to review your "own work"
Sometimes, I will read my own poems, to seen where I have been, to seen where I have gone and to see, what potentially, lies ahead.

I read this poem today and realized, how bright and full, the moon has been the last couple of days.

Have you noticed it to? It has been beautiful! How vain I must be to say, sometimes, I am amazed, by my own work, yet, I must confess, the words are not mine, how could they be? I hope you understand

MartinV

Pamela (66.38.146.204) -- Sunday, January 11 2004, 01:37 am

Completely
I completely understand what you just said Martin....sometimes when I write, I feel as though I am having an outer-body experience and the words aren't mine at all. Instead, they are from some other being that is within myself, who only comes out once and awhile. Or sometimes the subject of the poem is so compelling that it takes over your conscience and writes these words about itself - only for you to remember it so vivdly later on.

Beautiful poem Martin, just beautiful.

Leah (204.112.163.134) -- Sunday, January 11 2004, 07:00 am

I loved it!
This is a really unique poem. I loved it. You don't need me to tell you this but you are truly a poetic dreamer.

Martin Vann (63.185.64.253) -- Friday, July 9 2004, 05:33 pm

Thank You Leah
Leah,

I suppose, we have all, felt this way.

Thank You,
Martin V

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