A Sacred Place
There is a place within our hearts
Where we can rest our most scared thoughts
A place where we can shed our tears
And hide, our most heart felt fears
Yet, this place that shelters us
We find no solace, no resting place
For in our hearts we need a place
Thatís filled with love and has a face
I am that place, I am that face
My heart is warm and thanks to you
We share our hearts
Within this very, sacred place
Comments on this poem/writing:
|luc (184.108.40.206) -- Sunday, March 23 2003, 07:42 am|
i can esaly take that in very different ways.. or better yet interpret it in many ways.. i like the poem.. your a true artist.. keep on writing..
|barb (220.127.116.11) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 12:50 am|
now this I understand. alot of 5 letter words lol
|Martin Vann (18.104.22.168) -- Monday, March 24 2003, 07:03 pm|
Luc & Barb,
Simple words, simple verse, these are the words that are so sweet, often speak, the meaning of any verse.
There is no need to clothe our words in fancy garb.
I thank You both,
|Capricorn (22.214.171.124) -- Tuesday, March 25 2003, 01:33 pm|
I really love this poem martin. Like Luc I feel it is open to so many interpretations and I like that in a poem!
|sasha (126.96.36.199) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 12:30 am|
ight,martin i give u props 4 this one.good writing...
|Martin Vann (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, March 28 2003, 03:14 pm|
Yes, I love this place, its full of honesty and trust, I can always find something here, that I can count on, YOU!
Many of you have taught be some hard lessons just by sharing yourselves with me and I can't thank you enough!
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