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Well Written Words
Author: ShyHeart

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Well written words are like old ships,
they sail the open seas
Their sails filled with the summer breeze
Their progress smooth, they glide, it seems
Their course is straight, well written words
can set you free

The harbor lies just ahead
but this is not our journeys end
our sails will fill again one day
with words of magic, from our minds
our soles refreshed, our spirits climb

Well written words can fill our sails
and take us where we’ve never been
They set our course, into the wind
What life they have, your words and mine
It doesn’t matter, how dark the day
Well written words, will light the way.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Lori Ann Day (198.81.26.169) -- Saturday, February 22 2003, 10:59 am


You describe flight, and I fly all the time. Objectively, I can fly like an eagle or a hawk,
and view it all from above.
Well written words fly with wings, and make the
heart soar like when a songbird sings.
Martin Vann (65.57.61.136) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 04:09 pm

To Lori

You had read one of my poems and mentioned, you that you felt as if you had heard the words before, in spirit I assume. Strange, because as I read your reply, here, I remember reading a poem of yours and my reply was going to be. "You have the wigns of an Eagle, the strength of Hawk, yet a Dove's Heart."

Amazing, what I discover in reading poems, words shared from the heart.

Thank You Lori,

MartinV
Flinky Ivonne R. Matawaran cute (202.81.160.16) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 11:10 am

It's a beautifull poem u maid

Do you know that i love poems, because they make you feel special. Keep at a good work.


Thank you,
Flinky Cute
Martin Vann (171.75.221.3) -- Friday, October 17 2003, 03:25 pm

Flinky, you have been diging into my past, & R welcome

Flinky;

Thanks for the review, you dug deep into the archives for this one. Pleased you enoyed and thank you again.

MartinV
P.S.
I really, like the your name, Flinky, I think its, pretty.
 
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