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Am I Dying
Author: Meg

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if i closed my eyes now
i could pretend i am in bed
i could pretend i am happy
im trying...trying now to get to you
im sending the love i feel for you
unsure if youll recieve it.
i was supposed to tell you something..
oh i feel myself falling
i wont give up
this isnt as i had planned
i was seeing you today
i can see myself in the piece of glass
red, lots of red, blood?
it doesnt hurt...
the anxiety im feeling..
sweetheart i was going to tell you i love you
if only id done it yesterday...
now this is bad, i cant win i know it
i surrender...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (12.84.1.248) -- Sunday, September 29 2002, 04:57 pm

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wow... guess that shows you shall tell that special person you love 'em when ever you can. never wait or hold back. nicely put.
crystal (12.221.170.97) -- Saturday, December 7 2002, 11:44 pm

oh my god

that is the best poem ever and i should tell the person that i love befor its to late because you dont know what you have untill you lose it and i dont want my love leaveing with out knowing the truth:[
giovanna (207.10.8.170) -- Monday, May 12 2003, 02:58 pm

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this pome mad me cry it was so good
Amber (63.233.150.2) -- Tuesday, August 26 2003, 10:13 pm

sweet

i loved it its like don't wait to love cause it might be to late!!!!!
 
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