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Dreams
23 September, 2002
Author: Meg

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lifes journey to the final destiny
i had it all planned out
gee i took a wrong turn
because now im lost.
ive learnt and grown
ive loved and lost
ive hated and grieved
and i thought i saw something familiar up ahead..
but that was me crossing people
on their way back
now im having the last laugh
still lost though
know where i am but not where im going
its seeming dark and thick
and im scared at this part
i cant see anything
i wake up to find the darkness lifting
a fork ahead is what i see...
left or right? there are no signs!
left has trees and tall people singing
"take each day as it comes, no more planning"
right has water and fish that cant breathe singing
"dweel all you like, sit still and you will drown"
left side i go
and i start to smile again
i see something from my map...
being happy was in my plan!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

ROY C. CLAXTON JR (67.212.39.145) -- Tuesday, September 24 2002, 03:53 pm

IT'S RAINING WITH WORDS

THIS TOUCHES MY HEART--SMILE AND LAUGH--WRITE ME A POEM ABOUT A PERSON SITTING ON A LOG IN THE WILDERNESS OF TREASURES TO BE FOUND AS THOUGHTS FLOW--MAYBE YOU WILL GET A GLIMPS AT YOUR OWN CREATION
Roy Claxton (152.163.188.161) -- Wednesday, October 2 2002, 12:20 pm

I did one for you

Called "LOG SITTING"
meg (144.138.81.192) -- Monday, October 14 2002, 04:00 am

where?

is it on this site? i cant find it anywhere!! id like to read it :)
crystal (12.221.170.97) -- Sunday, December 8 2002, 12:55 am

meg do one for me on this site

do one for me to because my boy freind cheated on me <snip - no email addresses allowed>
barbara (216.125.163.55) -- Tuesday, February 18 2003, 03:35 pm

WOW

i thought this was good poem i am into poetry now adn this is good i got a good image from it
LinzAy (64.12.96.46) -- Wednesday, February 19 2003, 10:35 am

......

good poem....not extremely descrpitive but descriptive enuff to get a good visual. Good writing Meg!
zoey henderson (210.84.85.158) -- Sunday, June 15 2003, 09:48 am

great poem

it is a great poem and it explains a dream it is happy and i understand it well i think that it is a lovely poem
from zoey
p.s. keep writting poems your a great poem writer!!!!!!!!
 
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