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Grandpa
29 September, 2003
Author: Melissa

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I'm sorry i tried cutting my wrists,
But i wanted to go be with you.
I know its not my time to go.
I'm sorry I cried all those tears.
But i didnt want to let you go.
I'm learning now -I'm not going to cut,
Myself anymore. Even tho i thought
It showed the pain i was in-
It really didnt.
Nothing can really ever show the pain
I felt, when you passed away.
You're in a better place now, And not suffering,
So i'm happy about that.
The reason i'm sad, is cos you left, but i am
Glad you did, you had a rough life, and
You deserve the peace you're in.
So Grandpa i'm sorry i tried showing my pain
By cutting myelf. I'm going to do it anymore.
I love you a lot Grandpa -
And I love you even more for giving me this pain-
Because it jus makes me stronger.

I love you Grandpa!

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Terrie* (65.148.230.224) -- Tuesday, September 30 2003, 04:14 pm

Absolutely Beautiful...Melissa

sweetie ,this was such a beautiful tribute, your granpa is smiling with joy upon you....your wise and inspiring..your poem will help another soul that may face a similar situation. thank you for sharing about someone so special in your heart...you are a special individual. never apologize for crying...death of a loved one is always hard to bear. you will always shed tears for him..but you will always have smiles for him too..keep posting
Melissa (129.1.34.143) -- Tuesday, September 30 2003, 09:20 pm

Terrie*....

Hey thanks for your comment on tha peom...Yea i know i'll always shed sum tears for him, and yea i always have smiles for him too. he fought and fought for his life until he couldnt fight no more. So i'm glad he's in a better place now cos hes not suffering anymore. Thanks.
sarah*...... (68.111.9.235) -- Tuesday, November 4 2003, 06:16 am

like me

this poem is like me but it was my grandma died
Melissa (129.1.33.54) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 04:52 am

To Sarah*

hey...sorry to hear that ur grandma died. but i guess there's an end for every one i dont know.
Terrie* (65.148.210.64) -- Thursday, November 6 2003, 05:07 am

Melissa......

since the last time that i made a comment i dedicated a poem for you "Your Granpa" when you have a chance stop by my poem section and read it 'K
Amy (208.33.38.217) -- Tuesday, November 11 2003, 06:12 am

The Man I Never Knew

This man I never knew…. This man I hear stories about all the time… This man everyone got to meet but me…This man who loved life more then anything…This man… My Grandpa…My Grandpa who I have never met but yet I love him more then life…This man I will meet one in glory…..But until then…I Love You Grandpa
Melissa (129.1.34.143) -- Wednesday, November 19 2003, 07:32 pm

Terrie*

Thanks for the peom terrie*.
Terrie* (65.148.212.60) -- Friday, November 28 2003, 02:02 am

MELISSA....

your very welcomed.......
jordan wright (152.163.252.103) -- Monday, February 16 2004, 06:53 pm

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nice poem
 
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