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Confused
15 October, 2002
Author: Melissa

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I lay awake at night
Wonderin why, I'm so confused.

But why be confused?
Confused bout life

Confused bout a lot
All this confusion

Iz drivin me Insane!
But maybe some day

It will leave me fo ever
In tha meantime

I lay awake at night
Awake at night

Wondering why?
Why I'm so confused.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

LinzAy (209.240.198.62) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 07:17 am

only one

i thought i was the only one who got confused about i im confused when im confused! Good poem....:)
LinzAy (209.240.198.62) -- Wednesday, October 23 2002, 07:18 am

Oops!

i meant to say "who got confused about being confused......" oops!

sarah47404 (12.222.151.34) -- Monday, January 6 2003, 08:05 am

thank you

this is perfect....good poem
Bill (205.188.208.165) -- Saturday, August 9 2003, 07:04 am

Feelings

Ths is exactly what i'm going through
sierra bostick (216.120.157.116) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:14 pm

not

it was not what I was looking for
sierra bostick (216.120.157.116) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:15 pm

NOT

it was NOT what I was looking for
Pamela (66.38.146.173) -- Thursday, September 25 2003, 06:20 pm

Last Night

This was me last night! I had never felt so confused before, especially lying hoplessly alone in bed with the dark night outside only making it more threatening. I thought there was something wrong with me, but this poem shows that I'm not the only one. Thank you.
 
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