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Our Love
10 July, 2002
Author: Melissa

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Love iz like a river, never ending.
I loved you for you
I opened up to you, and gave you ma heart
But i see that you took ma love, and pretended to love me back.
You say "doez it matter?"
I say "Yes it matterz, cuz love iz like a river,never ending"
You took a knife and stabbed me in tha back
Now with blood drippin down,
Ma criez of pain,
I am growing weak and restless,
But i will survive thiz,
I will find ma soul mate
And he will take thiz knife outta me, and keep it out.
I'll then be as perfect as ever,
As perfect as i wuz when i met you,
But now i see we just wuznt meant to be,
You used me for ma love,
I thought our love wuz like a river, never ending
But i wuz wrong,
Our love iznt like a river, itz ending
Itz ending fast,
Itz ending now,
Our love,
Our love, iznt like a river, it ended

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Comments on this poem/writing:

meg (203.134.13.194) -- Saturday, July 13 2002, 01:36 pm

i love ur work!

ive read ur work and i absolutely love it, its just awesome!! i really love it!! good on you!
 
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