A Lover
22 June, 2002
Author: Melissa
A lover iz nice, caring,& understanding
A lover iz someone you can count on.
A lover iz someone you can hold,
When your feeling down.
A lover iz your soul mate,
A lover iz also your life.
A lover iz when it feelz like eternity
when you're apart from each other.
A lover iz somone sorta like...-
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Comments on this poem/writing:
| farrah (24.187.2.133) -- Monday, February 7 2005, 11:51 pm The poem was a great poem it is very emotional.... |
| NO NAME (68.81.137.91) -- Thursday, March 10 2005, 01:36 am Your poem could be must better, especially when ypur speaking of such a hot topic. You must haven't found your true love because if you had your poem would be more passionate. Try to write about thing your passionate about and maybe your poem will be a little more better. Not horrible just could use a little more improvement! (Sorry ir I seem a little harsh, but you put thie poem out there) |
| rainbow jade butterfly (24.52.205.167) -- Thursday, July 10 2014, 07:58 pm beautiful |
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