Overloaded Lover
Author: Mental


Overloaded lover
i saw the danger
her lust was my cover
although kind of a stranger.
underneath her swoon
over in her arms
the daintly covered iced moon
whispers it's charms.
drowning in the dark
surrounded in you
the perfect place for my heart to park
felt like a perfect fit shoe. .


Comments on this poem/writing:

xeracy ( -- Wednesday, November 27 2002, 06:36 pm

Been there done that. You painted that perfectly.
anonymous ( -- Friday, November 29 2002, 05:03 am

to xeracy

why thank you very much, it's been long a go but still lingers
to xeracy ( -- Saturday, November 30 2002, 02:28 am

to xeracy

let's try this again,why thank you very muchit' bee a long time ago but it still lingers.
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