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That Night Was A Gift
Author: Mental

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that night was a gift
underneath the sheets
oversheared mind rifts
my tears were stabbing the streets.
frozen on the pavement
the love that was hot
was frozen in amazement
then my overbearing emotions got caught.
the years have past
every time i think of her
my heart beats really fast.
frozen moments linger within
the moon
the stars and the cold wind.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Pamela (66.38.146.184) -- Tuesday, November 26 2002, 02:25 am

Wow

I can only assume that she was as beautiful as these words written for her.
pamela (66.153.163.144) -- Wednesday, November 27 2002, 12:18 am

to pamela

oh! yes how right you are i just hope she's happy wherever she is, and that i do wonder about. "sigh"
taboo (71.68.228.189) -- Thursday, November 27 2014, 04:57 am

gift

oh lucky girl to bad she doesn't know these words are for her
 
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