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Looking So Overwhelmed
5 June, 2002
Author: Mental

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The overdone look
of midnight reality
it's a much better life
that's a brutality.
looking so overwhelmed
praying under the milky way
you wanted to leave
i wanted you to stay.
there was hope
when i looked in your eyes
the morning i could not cope
such a clever disguise.
soaked up and soft
you took my emotion
up and aloft.
to much to hold
especially
if your hard and cold.

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