Box Of Darkness
Here in this box of darkness
where everything's the same
i still remember the daylight
and the pouring rain.
if the night never remembers
then it's just as well
then i'm just a drop of blood
in a flame of hell
Comments on this poem/writing:
|Mental () -- Tuesday, September 26 2000, 05:01 am|
kristen, the comment on my poem was very how can i say made me
feel very excited inside as it left my darkness. what a sensations that
doesn't happen very often.
|Kristen () -- Tuesday, September 24 2002, 05:00 am|
Mental, the blood drop in flames is perfect...such pain, living, sizzling pain.
A kiss of balmy verdant green to smother the flames, cool the blood is what I send to you. Love,K
|blade (18.104.22.168) -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 11:50 pm|
this is a great poem!!!!
|mental (22.214.171.124) -- Thursday, February 24 2005, 12:51 am|
thank you very much, mental
|Haven (126.96.36.199) -- Thursday, February 24 2005, 01:17 am|
very nice. short, sweet and well written! thanks for sharing!
|mental (188.8.131.52) -- Friday, February 25 2005, 01:46 am|
thank you for your wonderful comment
|Raibow (184.108.40.206) -- Friday, November 20 2020, 03:42 am|
Could not have said it better myself,excellent!
Click here to read other Poems by Mental
Copyright©2017-1999 by Rebecca R. Hammack
COPYRIGHT NOTICE: All Rights Reserved. No part of this website, including all pictures and written words, may be reproduced or copied in any manner from this website without permission of the original author of the work. All poetry and pictures herein remain the sole property of the original author and/or copyright owner. All poetry on this website has been submitted by the original author of the work. To contact any author of the work please e-mail: firstname.lastname@example.org so the proper person may be notified.