Box Of Darkness
Author: Mental


Here in this box of darkness
where everything's the same
i still remember the daylight
and the pouring rain.
if the night never remembers
then it's just as well
then i'm just a drop of blood
in a flame of hell


Comments on this poem/writing:

Mental () -- Tuesday, September 26 2000, 05:01 am

good feelings

kristen, the comment on my poem was very how can i say made me
feel very excited inside as it left my darkness. what a sensations that
doesn't happen very often.
Kristen () -- Tuesday, September 24 2002, 05:00 am

image perfect... *sigh*

Mental, the blood drop in flames is perfect...such pain, living, sizzling pain.
A kiss of balmy verdant green to smother the flames, cool the blood is what I send to you. Love,K
blade ( -- Tuesday, February 15 2005, 11:50 pm


this is a great poem!!!!
mental ( -- Thursday, February 24 2005, 12:51 am

to blade thanks

thank you very much, mental
Haven ( -- Thursday, February 24 2005, 01:17 am

no title

very nice. short, sweet and well written! thanks for sharing!
mental ( -- Friday, February 25 2005, 01:46 am

to haven

thank you for your wonderful comment
Raibow ( -- Friday, November 20 2020, 03:42 am

To mental

Could not have said it better myself,excellent!
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