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Black And Blue Love
Author: MiZz_DoLLarZz

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never say good bye
i dont want it to end this way
dont look back
it will hurt more when i see you go astray
we had a good life together
untill you decided to cheat
i thought it would last forever
until i started to get beat
the love we had i thought was everlasting
like the kid that you fathered with me
the different ways you used to tell me i love you
well that was the way it used to be
soon you started to bring girls home
and when i objected you'd hit me as i'd speak
i can't believe you would f*** them inbetween are his and her sheets
so i guess are love didn't matter
even though i was so in love with you
i still can't undersatnd how i could love a guy who turned my eyes black and blue
it will hurt to remember the bad
so i will only think of the good
i really tired to change the abuse
belive me i did all could

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Luc (67.37.230.171) -- Sunday, October 27 2002, 04:12 am

.......

dont mean to be mean but .. fuck! i mean that in a good way. how is it in a good way dont ask me. i liked it a lot, but like that guy beating you and such, damn. its a good poem i do really like it but i dont know that just the first thing that kinda poped in my mind.
sondra (66.156.159.37) -- Sunday, November 3 2002, 03:45 am

I understand

This poem is a very understandable and every word of it is what I went through with my ex. And I just want you to know that I understand deeply and the poem is a real eye opener.
 
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