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Confusion
29 August, 2002
Author: MiZz_DoLLarZz

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My mind is telling me yes
my soul is telling me no
my body wants to see you
but my heart still doesnt know
for, my hearts been broken before
and i havent had time to mend
why is it when we fall in love with a guy
we feel like this in the end.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

luc (12.84.4.187) -- Tuesday, October 1 2002, 03:40 am

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because the majority of men usually ok alway break your heart. and guys like them make the good ones look bad cuasing so much confusion, in which onces to choose.
CaRmZ (203.108.4.70) -- Thursday, November 7 2002, 11:10 pm

this is so true

this is so true i really like it cause this happens 2 every 1
Stacy (205.188.209.78) -- Saturday, November 9 2002, 07:11 pm


I enjoyed your poem becuase I have felt this way before
capricorn (62.30.192.1) -- Sunday, November 10 2002, 04:53 pm

It hurts

A battle between mind ,body & soul! Who was it said
`It is better to have loved & lost than never loved at all' It hurts to lose though!!
AngEl (12.32.65.5) -- Friday, February 28 2003, 10:28 pm

I'm In a Bind!!!

I'm havin relationship troubles right now...and this poem pretty much explains how I feel...it's nice to be able to look up poems like this...that relates to your life.. its kinda a guide and it puts ur thoughts in order and helps u to be able to be clear on everything.
Aaron (24.217.84.133) -- Friday, March 21 2003, 04:20 am

It happend

this happened to me, but it was with a girl, my best friend made me and her break up, and when she left...i felt so bad, and now its like 4 months later and im still feeling the pain
*~*Korina*~* (198.81.26.76) -- Saturday, October 11 2003, 06:36 am

I Believe and I Feell

Hi Its true that peoms says it all I been there and I bet yall have too
Dawn (24.43.214.236) -- Tuesday, December 23 2003, 08:19 pm

I know wat u mean

Hi im 14 years old and i already know wat u mean from this peom i know and all my frens told me i would get hurt soo if ur fren tell u soemthing LISTEN to them or eles u will get HURT BIG tyme thank you
Britany (192.168.101.231) -- Thursday, February 5 2004, 05:03 pm

I Know How You Feel

Thanks GREAT POEM
Kayci (165.121.81.59) -- Saturday, February 7 2004, 05:26 pm

understandable

Yea, its understandable that so many people can relate to your poem, it finds that one place inside all of us that knows we have felt that way at one time or another. Its the basic falling inlove story..
me (76.106.215.107) -- Tuesday, December 4 2007, 10:49 pm

gonna send this to my friend

this is what my friend is going through!!!
 
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