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Cloud Of Fear
Author: Moonstarshine

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Upon a cloud of silk
soft..light...
as feather
we travel together.
You by my side
touching the
skies
feeling the
soft breeze
upon our face.
In tune with
our songs..
rhymes of
togetherness
lasting forever
until...
the bells toll
bringing a warning.
Winds go strong
something's wrong
chills the air
a thunderstorm..
why does my heart
pain?
am I going insane
where do I belong?
down thrashes rain
your arms wide open
but I go blind
fading into nothingness
aching head
throbbing mind
and all that I had found
pours down
in just a tear
alone I find myself
travelling
on a cloud of fear.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (205.188.209.13) -- Thursday, March 18 2004, 06:31 pm

Must be CLOUD 9

Hahhahahha! What's going on Moonstarshine? I dig your poem! Very interesting and creative!
Moonstarshine (202.141.239.5) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 07:54 am

highs and lows of cloud 9

Meridian, Level nine was the very highest cumoulonimbus, which can reach 30,000 or 40,000 feet and appear as glorious white mountains in the sky..so if according to you if it is'cloud 9'then I find myself at the very peak of existence!( in the begining of the poem yes)
By the way,in Danish the expression with the same meaning is called "Den syvende Himmel"- to be in the seventh heaven is to be at the top of the world..but sadly I did not find myself there at the end of the poem.. ty for your interesting comment :-)
Meridian (205.188.209.8) -- Friday, March 19 2004, 04:33 pm

Very smart

Wow moonstarshine! I didn't know that; thanks for schooling me in the above paragraph. You just might be a good tutor in the science field! Great poem again Moonstarshine!!!!!!!!
 
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