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His Moon
28 December, 2003
Author: Moonstarshine

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I look towards the open sky
wrapped in my own arms,I sigh.
Eyes reflecting the Moon"s glow,
pen in hand,my thoughts flow.
"Does he ever look upto you.. ( moon)
searching me in the glow of you"?
for the image you throw down at me
wrapped in the beams,its him I see.
I wish I could travel in the starry night
to reach to him, in his arms tonight.
I know he misses me as well,
in every heartbeat I can tell.
Sprinkle some of your magic oh Moon!
make him see in you..me his Moon.
With these thoughts,
I bend my head..
Wiping a tear, and a smile instead.
One more day goes without you,
one more day of missing
you.

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Brenda Michelle (209.240.207.249) -- Wednesday, December 31 2003, 06:04 am

Great Poem

i really like your poetry... i hope that you keepwriting cause i would love to read more from you... you give alot of feeling in your writing, i really like that in a poem.... great work of art.
Silkened Moon (204.31.225.15) -- Wednesday, December 31 2003, 05:17 pm

How Sweet is this!

I loved this poem so much, I mean, its totally beautiful the way these words were put together in such profound form! And another thing I like about this poem is that it talks about my best inspiration ever...THE MOON! I love it so much! Your definitely someone I would be a fan too! Very beautiful work! Loved it all!
 
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