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Cruel World
4 April, 2004
Author: Leah06

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I try to close my eyes
To lock out all the hate
To forget all my problems
To a place I can create.
Where no body can touch me
No sorrow and no pain
Where there is nothing to lose
And all the more to gain.
Where all I content
No one cries at night
Love is never lost
Punks never fight.
Preps never drink
Jocks never die
Families never drift apart
Fathers never cry.
My world seems almost perfect
No one ever gets hurt
Too bad I cannot create this world
Until I am 6ft under dirt.
For now I will have to suffer
While we cause each other pain
We never earned a happy ending
We deserve to live in vain.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.117.16) -- Monday, April 5 2004, 10:41 pm

I simply love this one!!!

Outstanding Leah06!! You're a natural born poet!! I love the part about the punks, preps, jocks, and so forth!! Good job Leah!!

Meridian
Meridian (64.12.117.16) -- Tuesday, April 6 2004, 12:46 am

Hey Leah06!!!!!

Ah!! If there was ever such a world, I'd be in Heaven everyday!! Hhahha. To breathe in the own world I live in, now that's something. A world without lawbreakers, or other corruption!! This is one heck of a dream!! And it's a good one!! LOL!

Keep sharing your poetic talent Leah06!!

Meridian
Cieara (24.4.45.197) -- Friday, April 23 2004, 06:21 am

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Your poems get more and more exciting, emotional, and inspirational with each one Leah. I love you, and support you. This one is great as well. If you ever obtain this world, let me come.
Leah06 (206.110.20.2) -- Friday, April 23 2004, 11:25 pm

Cieara

you are my first new comment due to a website "upgrade" well thanks cieara im glad you like my poetry. Dont worry, if i do get thes world created, i will invite you to come along!
 
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