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Countryside Grasslands
Author: Newage Caveman

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Cool winds, chirping birds, I am in the countryside, at loss for words.
Trees are in plenty, so are the fruits
The scene is so complete, picturesque so cute.
Morning sun shining bright flowers are in full bloom
Bright horizons lying ahead, dispelling all gloom.
Grasslands give shelter to the solitary reaper
Eulogies over the air even by the penniless pauper.
My picture of future is not bellicose
It is gay and lively, bright and grandiose.
Devoid of war, devoid of bloodshed
In peace we unite and save humanity instead.
If there were no fighting and no wars to come
There would be lasting peace on earth for years to come
Exquisite daffodils shining bright
Wake up call of the hen, loud and clear with all its might.
Wake up oh Wordsworth, wake up oh Keats
Wake up immediately, wake up from your sleep.
You can see them all, you can see them here
Welcome to countryside grasslands you will never leave.
Cool winds, chirping birds, I am in the countryside, at loss for words...

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Meridian (64.12.117.15) -- Monday, March 29 2004, 09:37 pm

Bravo

Now that's what I like to read, "Countryside Grasslands"! You write with exquisiteness! I love the beauty of nature, and all it offers us to see! This deserves a nomination!! I'd vote on it too! Good job Newage, good job!
Sweetvenom (47.251.0.13) -- Monday, May 22 2006, 05:44 pm

Wow! I can dream on this!

Newage, As I read thro ur lines, I can visualize the scene. Nice peace of work..
As Meridian has penned, This deserves a nomination!
slim Rocker! (64.135.215.156) -- Tuesday, February 6 2007, 08:48 pm

Ummm...

Weird...but good...
Bob S. (74.171.208.50) -- Monday, January 25 2010, 10:54 pm

Exquisiteness

That is a wonderful poem. I write poems myself you know!! Thanks,
Bob S.
abdi (66.213.29.2) -- Thursday, May 12 2011, 09:06 pm

i like it

i want to use it
HASHim AhmeSultanate of Oman (188.135.45.118) -- Monday, November 28 2011, 01:57 pm

wow!!

It is so beautiful . Any comment is out of place. God loves you.
love (174.107.242.61) -- Monday, February 27 2012, 09:19 pm

it rhymes

i like it it is a good poem to read!!!!
BARB (66.103.59.160) -- Thursday, March 1 2012, 07:02 am

good description in your writung

It was so good .You made it so real. bravo bravo.
 
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