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You Lied To Me
22 December, 2003
Author: Nikki

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You sat there and lied to me.
Even as I cried.
You gave me pretty words that later
you would deny.
You promised you wouldn't do this,
You lied to me.
I believed all that you had to say.
Now I'm dying Inside.
All my pain is because of you.
Now what is it I should do?
I gave you all that I had.
The words you spoke where never true.
You lied to me.
All you gave to me where broken promises,
and emty dreams.
All because You lied to me.
I was so blind that I could not see.
I couldn't see that you where lying to me.

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Comments on this poem/writing:

Clive (63.184.0.207) -- Sunday, December 28 2003, 04:51 am

worth more

If this is from your feelings past,
A person who lies,
Is never worth your soul,
You will always be more,
More to give to that person one day,
I hope you find better,
Good words for all
thank you for writing and sharing
Nikki (152.163.252.70) -- Thursday, January 1 2004, 01:10 am

TO ALL

thank you for reading my work. I love hearing your comments. The words I write about are very real and very resent. I just hope that by sharing my pain that I can somehow help someone else deal with theirs.
crystal (208.254.109.28) -- Friday, February 20 2004, 07:04 pm

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great poem! ive been lied to many times before and it sucks so i know how you feel. keep up the great work!!
Meridian (64.12.116.138) -- Wednesday, April 14 2004, 01:36 am

Some are famous for that..............

What's up Nikki? This is Meridian here! "You Lied To Me" was very heartfelt! I hate betrayal too! I've went through that process a dozen times! But, hold on to the rope, and never let go Nikki!

This is "someone who cares"------------Meridian
LinzAy (24.27.237.195) -- Friday, April 16 2004, 04:00 pm

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Wow. One word comes to mind with this poem..or shall I say name...Great writing Nikki. It's a shame we know how this feels.
 
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